Good animation, I liked the way the lip synch was done. The story was good too, but the script reading was obviously very heavily influenced by Half Life: Full Life Consequences. I was honestly expecting it to be mentioned in the credits or something like that. In future flashes I'd encourage you to change the style of voice to distance yourself from comparisons like what I've made, but they say that imitation is the sincerest form of flattery and I do think you pulled it off very well.